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Do not compare me to a summers day,
I'm an autumn baby, with fallen leaves,
Printed in gold and amber across my skin,
With the deepest red sunset lips,
Offset by snowy skin.
I am the crisp breath of wind,
On oxygen starved lungs.
Forget the call of the heat,
And fall into my mist embrace.
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. I was born to the frost covered leaves.
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:iconangelichope:
Very lovely!!!:heart:
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*SereneCyrene Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello! Your poem has been featured here: [link] :floating:
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~blood-red-ribbons Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thats amazing, thank you :)
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=Daft-Enigma Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well deserved DLD!
There is something very enchanting about this poem that stad with the reader for a while after it's over.
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~blood-red-ribbons Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I was really proud of it :)
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:iconshadowedacolyte:
Last four lines are excellent!

I enjoyed this immensely. Autumn is by far my favorite season. (And congrats on the DLD!)
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~blood-red-ribbons Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you very much! I was quite proud of this :)
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*xlntwtch Jan 4, 2013   Writer
I definitely feel colder after reading this short poem.
The imagery includes the title-season and the fall -- and you seasoned this piece just right. Thank you. :+fav:
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~blood-red-ribbons Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Comments like that really brighten up my days :)
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*xlntwtch Jan 4, 2013   Writer
Your work helped my day, too. And you're welcome :)
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