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Do not compare me to a summers day,
I'm an autumn baby, with fallen leaves,
Printed in gold and amber across my skin,
With the deepest red sunset lips,
Offset by snowy skin.
I am the crisp breath of wind,
On oxygen starved lungs.
Forget the call of the heat,
And fall into my mist embrace.
. I was born to the frost covered leaves.
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Given 2013-07-05
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Puffleguy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
I'm sure Shakespeare would be proud! Maybe even a little inspired :clap:
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha why thank you :) 
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Simplistically beautiful. Stunning really. 
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :) 
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SMAdams Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :rose:
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BatmanWithBunnyEars Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013   General Artist
Not only is this a clever take on an old cliche, but the imagery is among the most beautiful I've ever read. Bravo. :clap:
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D thats so nice to read :) 
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skeegoedhart Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow beautiful - congrats on the DD!
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :) i was so surprised!
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OnlyOliveOil Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
haha i see the reference in the first line... 
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Serentic Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Beautiful work. <3 Congrats on the DD; we were each given one on the same day. I love the poem! c:
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha that so cool! I was away when it happened :) 
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tirasunil Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Writer
Congrats! :) I love this!
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
< thank you!
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Mairelyn Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beautiful
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^_^
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oliviavonvanity Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Artist
Beautiffuly written
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
THank you :) 
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oliviavonvanity Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Artist
welcome
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AgentImagination22 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing! This, my friend, is going in favorites.
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thank you!
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StampGuyMAX Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
"Mist" should be "misty."

I can relate to this :D
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I prefer mist 
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schnurp Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
this is so beautiful, the images and flow of the poem as well as the clear language and shakespeare allusions! i love it : )
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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Zeke-01 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Oooooh. I love it.
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe i'm glad :) 
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DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013   Writer
beautiful imagery. very well written. Awesome job!
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013   Writer
Your welcome! :)
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dawnflower8 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Someone I know wrote one like this with winter
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ooh cool :)
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SimplySilent Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Lovely work :heart: Congrats on the DD! :clap:
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you! <3 i feel so honored. 
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Drawing-Stars-02 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I truly love this because I can relate. :D
Born in the fall for that matter. <3
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha so many fall babies :) 
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Rayckro Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Congratulation on the Daily Deviation! :D
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks i was so surprised!
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DreamingShark Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! I love poems with imagery like this <3
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe thank you, me too!
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JKRavensfield Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I really like this! :pumpkin:
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good! :D
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JRollendz Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :D
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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jcrawkurface Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Simply beautiful. I love the Shakespearean allusions, the metaphors, the similes, and the essence of autumn found within.
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blood-red-ribbons Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Comment like this make me so happy
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